Thursday, September 30, 2010
In Our Time (Masculinity) -Andrew
A recurring theme we see in Hemingway's In Our Time is the idea of masculinity. Being a novel centered around World War !, this isn't surprising. What is surprising is the way that Hemingway presents masculinity through the characters in the book. Bullfighting was an excellent way for Hemingway to portray the connection between two masculine enemies, just as it was in WWI on a larger scale. What is significant in this quote is the part which describes the matador and the bull, just prior to the bull's demise, as being one. I think this is Hemingway's way of conveying the strange bond between all men, a silent interconnectedness if you will, even as they stare down the barrel of a gun at each-other.
This quote precludes a chapter regarding Nick and George skiing in the Alps. The same idea of an "unspoken" bond between the two is quickly noticed as they enter a bar, in stark contrast to Hemingway's portrayal of women as bonding through lots of spoken word, and even through crying in some parts. This masculine way of relating to each-other could probably be best described as a silent enjoyment of things, and a quote from the chapter Cross-Country Snow portrays this perfectly.
P.109 "There's nothing really can touch skiing, is there?" Nick said. "The way it feels when you drop off on a long run." "Huh," said Geroge, "It's too swell to talk about."
Wednesday, September 29, 2010
Katrina's In Our Time Post
This is the interchapter before "Soldier's Home in Chapter VII. This passage is interesting because it provides the reader with a vivid emotional picture of a soldier fighting in a trench during WWI. It is interesting because in this soldier's time of need he desperately turns to religion when he feels devoid of hope. It seems implied in this passage that the soldier is not otherwise a religious man, but now that he finds himself in the most hopeless and frightening moments of his life, he turns to Christ. While considering these things, here is an exerpt from "Soldier's Home" that follows:
" 'Would you kneel and pray with me, Harold?' his mother asked. They knelt down beside the dining-room table and Krebs's mother prayed. 'Now, you pray, Harold,' she said. 'I can't,' Krebs said. 'Try, Harold.' 'I can't.' 'Do you want me to pray for you?' 'Yes.' So his mother prayed for him and then they stood up and Krebs kissed his mother and went out of the house. He had tried so to keep his life from being complicated."1
This passage shows a different soldier's sentiments about religion that strongly contrast with the first passage. In this case, Krebs finds it difficult to pray with his mother because, perhaps, he feels strongly he should not lie when he evidently does not believe in praying.
This raises several questions:
First, why did Hemingway choose to juxtapose these two stories. What relationship do these two stories have, if any?
Second, in the first passage, why do you think the soldier pleaded to Christ so adamantly when he apparently feels no connection to Him? Do you believe that in the soldier's moment of need he truly felt some connection to Jesus? How do you explain his feelings at the end, when he is safe again?
Third, how do you explain Krebs's reaction to his mother's request of prayer? Why do you think Krebs chooses not to pray with his mother, rather than to give in and pray with her? Additionally, what do you think Krebs is implying when he says "He had tried so to keep his life from being complicated"?
Finally, what do these two passages together say about the role of religion in a soldier's life?
1. Ernest Hemingway, In Our Time (New York: Scribner, 2003), 67-77).
Heather's In Our Time Post
Hemingway includes this description of the grasshopper because it is a metaphor suggesting that the grasshopper and Nick are similar. The hoppers are not the same as they were before the land was burned over, as Nick is not the same as he was before the war. However, the effects on the grasshopper of the land being burnt are physical, while the effects of the war on Nick are psychological/ emotional. His wondering how long the grasshoppers will remain that way is reflective of his frustration of dealing with the effects of the war.
Both Nick and The Narrator in Surfacing struggle because of events from their past. How is it that their situations differ?
How does the last sentence ““Go on hopper,” Nick said, speaking out loud for the first time. “Fly away somewhere,”” relate to Nick?
Saturday, September 25, 2010
Becky's In Our Time Post
Despite the situation being described in this passage Hemingway uses direct, emotionless prose and very few vivid descriptions to create this scene. Instead of dark or shadowy language one would expect to detail the scene of two injured soldies there is a motif of sunlight rather than darkness. Hemingway discusses the sun shining on Nick's face yet chooses to note that Rinaldi's face was "downward against the wall." This shows how Nick seems to be indifferent to the pain and trauma he has just been through. Intead of being slumped against the wall like Rinaldi he is upright, facing the street with the sun shining on his face. His description of his injuries is equally as detached as he merely states, "He had been hit in the spine." There is no discussion of pain or trauma, just the simple fact of his injury.
Hemingway also includes that "Nick looked straight ahead brilliantly," showing that he doesn't feel the need to hide his face from the death or destruction around him. In this situation of destruction, pain, and loss Nick looks straight ahead brilliantly. He seems to take in what he sees without actually processing what it means. He only seems focused on the fact that the stretcher bearers would be coming by soon.
The observance that, "It was going well," is juxtaposed with the previous sentence's discussion of the loss of human life Nick is observing. He describes the dead Austrian's around him as being "in the shade of the house" that has been destroyed by the battle. The house is the only object that is described in detail showing that it has significance to this scene. The house could perhaps represent a war torn Europe with dead soldiers lying in the shade of it's destruction. The image of this house could also represent a fellow soldier. By describing the "pink" insides of the house Hemingway could be connecting this symbol to one of death. The inside of the house is twisted and parts of it have fallen out. The house is the reader's only physical description of the surroundings, besides the fact that Nick is leaning up against the wall of a church which has not been destroyed. This could also relate to the idea of a church's significance to the mindset of a warrior. In a time of stress he is propped up against a church for stability.
Nick does not focus on the events that lead to his injuries but only seems concerned with the next step, his life had become fragmented into clips that exclude the actual cause of the violence that has disturbed him and left him broken. He seems oddly optimistic about his situation and tries to engage Renaldi in a conversation about how they have now made their peace. "Senta" could be referring to a city in Serbia where they were fighting in the war (yes, I did Google it). The war effort has reached this city and is moving forward through it. Despite the effects of this Nick still proclaims that things were going well. This strange optimism despite the death that surrounded him reminded me of a passage in an earlier chapter titled 'Indian Camp' in which Nick went along with his father as he performed a C-section on an Indian woman who was having trouble with her child birth. At the end of this gruesome story Nick asserts that, "...he felt quite sure that he would never die." (p 19) Nick seems to have an irrational view of his own mortality and therefore can't access feelings of fear, pain, or loss in his life.
The fact that Nick doesn't relate emotions to what he visually sees anymore would gives an explanation as to why he can remain sitting upright with his face in the sun. He is disconnected from what occurs around him. He becomes measured and calculated in his movements and only moves his head "carefully" which is the only way he shows caution or prudence in the whole seen. He doesn't even fear for Rinaldi or his injuries, but instead he remarks how they no longer have to be patriots. His duty is paid in his mind, releasing him from the horror he finds himself in.
This passage details a scene of war that is atypical. No fear or remorse is present in the description. This shows the affect of the trauma and the loss of continuity of thoughts and emotions brought about by war.
Question #1:
What do you think the church or house signify in this passage?
Question #2:
What does Nick's onesided conversation with Rinaldi signify? Why is this dialogue included?
Question #3:
The passage after this paragraph is titled "A Very Short Story" and discusses a romance between a nurse and a patient that was very short lived. Why do you think this paragraph preceeds that story?
Thursday, September 23, 2010
Hemingway Interview from The Paris Review
An' Surfacing Blog Post
“She must have heard the door opening and closing in the night; she produces a smile, warm conspiratorial, and I know what circuits are closing in her head: by screwing Joe she’s brought us back together.”
In the above sentences, I think Atwood has one more time emphasize the current problems of the Western civilizations. The idea of being others’ savior has been deeply implanted into everyone. She seems to even put it further and alludes that this heroic idea appears to be root from the sense of fairness that has been distorted by a misplaced sense of self-righteousness and physical tendency. In the stories, Anna after learning that the Narrator has refused Joe’s proposal has had sex with Joe and believe that she can save Joe and the Narrator’s relationship by doing so and judge that her course of action was a spot on by invoking the idea of retaliation/sense of fairness that she thought the Narrator also has a similar idea about that.
“Saving the world, everyone wants to; men think they can do it with guns, women with their bodies, love conquers all, conquerors love all, mirages raised by words.”
Professor Steele once remarked in a lecture that the thing that is most feared by western civilization is chaos. The ideas of conquering and being conquerors may serve the role to help establishing the systematic rules in society to restraint people. But would those ideas ultimately give rises to chaos? The Western civilization nurtured individuals from the early age to appreciate themselves and with that their self-belief in their judgments emerges.
Would the physical and violent tendencies of current civilization along with emerging sense of self-righteousness further distorted the sprit of fairness in civilization and lead to chaotic conditions, when people start to consider them above the laws and start acting beyond the social restraints?
If the idea of heroes is not correct, what could we possibly do to first protect ourselves and afterward help to fix the idea of conquerors that is at heart of current civilization?
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
Library Location Change
Monday, September 20, 2010
Emma's Surfacing Blog Post
-- Ch 17 PG 141
At this point in the novel the main character is alone and searching the swamp for places her father may have visited. Being alone gives her time to reflect on her surroundings without having to put up a front for the people that she is continuously feeling a larger and larger disconnect with.
This passage is very interesting because not only does it revisit the concept of religion it also further illustrates her disconnect from civilization. She is continuing to see people as violent aggressors and it is apparent here that she is beginning to feel threatened by people invading her space. It seems like the more time she spends at her father's cabin the more distant she feels from other people and the closer she feels towards the land around her.
In this passage she is falling back on religious teachings that she wasn't ever directly taught. Earlier in the book, the main character explains that her family didn't take her to Sunday school, which is why I find it intriguing that she is using very religious language here. So, my first question is why do you think that the character is using religious diction here? What compels her to fall back on religion when her family never preached its importance?
The last line, "if they didn't kill birds and fish they would have killed us," evokes very strong emotion in the narrator. What do you think the narrator means by this? Is she talking about literal killing? Or is she referring to the destruction of nature by the corruptive and invading disease called "civilization"?
Monday Notes
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
John's Post (Surfacing)
Surfacing
“This is the fifth book I’ve done; the first was the Department of Manpower employment manual, young people with lobotomized grins, rapturous in their padded slots: Computer Programmer, Welder, Executive Secretary, Lab Technician.” (Atwood 50)
At this point in the novel the protagonist is describing to the reader her profession as a corporate artist, a profession whose pursuit she attributes to ex-husband’s advice. She reveals that she originally aspired to be what she calls a “real artist,” a distinction that suggests a compromise the protagonist was compelled to make.
What I find particularly interesting in this passage is the protagonist’s apparent discomfort with the labels, in this case referred to “padded slots,” of the young people she mentions. The concept of organization and labels is one we encountered in Conrad’s Heart of Darkness, and Atwood seems to similarly comment on society’s need to arbitrarily classify individuals. In the same way that Conrad described “the Manager” or “The Russian” as exclusive and definitive terms, Atwood presents the idea of labels as a means of confining the individual. The reader can easily identify the conspicuous reference to some sort of solitary confinement in the words “padded slots,” which implies the protagonist’s negative view of the classifications.
An equally interesting aspect of this passage is the hypocrisy that it reveals in the protagonist’s point of view. The use of the word lobotomy, for example, carries with it a negative connotation of an emotionally inert individual. However, the protagonist earlier in the novel describes how “To be deaf and dumb would be easier” (7), suggesting that the inability to fully interact with those around her would be a welcome change.
- Can the inconsistent outlook of Atwood’s protagonist be paralleled to Marlow’s evolving outlook in Heart of Darkness?
- In a statement directly prior to the passage provided the protagonist admits she find comfort in the job title of “corporate artist.” How do you think she can reconcile her view of labels as means of confinement with the mental security they seem to provide?
Margaret Atwood Interview
Monday, September 13, 2010
Courtney's Blog Surfacing Ch. 1-5
The narrator first mentions how the lake is dangerous. I feel like this is building up to when her brother's drowning was mentioned. She mentions how people drown every year and logs float under the surface of the water. This was then how she described how her brother was seen by her mother when he died. Irony is used when the narrator describes how easy it is to get lost on the lake. She states that she memorized the landmarks and knows what to look for now, but when it comes to her emotions and love she is very lost. She has a very hard time trusting anyone and this is shown through her statement that she doesn't trust Evans. She is still very upset about her divorce so she has a hard time letting anyone in too close and her best friend has only known her for two months.
Thursday, September 9, 2010
Ryan W's Post (Heart of Darkness)
Wednesday, September 8, 2010
Heart of Darkness Close Reading for September 9th
“Kurtz—Kurtz-- that means short in German—don’t it? Well, the name was as true as everything else in his life—and death. He looked at least seven feet long.” (Conrad, 74)
Seen here is almost a displeasure in Marlow’s “voice”. This short passage comes shortly after Marlow’s conversation with Kurtz’s admirer, and Marlow’s recognition of disbelief that Kurtz has ever conversed humble things with any man. Marlow says himself to the admire that “…Kurtz is no idol of [his],” (73) and that is reiterated here in the above passage. It also shows the irony/sarcasm that has frequented among Conrad’s writing. I say sarcasm because you can almost read the passage with an attitude that mocks the meaning of Kurtz’s name, like Marlow is actually scoffing at the thought that anything said about Kurtz by other men is considered real, or the truth.
1. In the first half of the book Marlow was so “excited” to meet Kurtz, or at least it seemed that way. This changes throughout the book. What events or thoughts contribute to this change of feeling towards Kurtz?
2. The whole passage that this part is taken from discusses Marlow’s genuine disgust of Kurtz and the way Marlow’s crew has been treated by Kurtz’s company. Do you think Marlow, deep down, still has admiration for Kurtz, perhaps hoping that Kurtz might “spare them”? (at this point in the story, not reading further)
Heart Of Darkness - Thurs Sep 8
This selection begins by displaying Marlow’s disgust with Kurtz – his recognition of wrongdoing and disregard for the lives of the natives (enemies). It is this dissociation from justice which the book embodies. The reuse of the word abject shows his deep disgust with Kurtz’s mindset, and furthers that with the rest of his description.
Kurtz's quote is a strong use of Conrad’s sarcasm, which as was spoke of in lecture is a very prominent element in the text. His calmness of the situation is glorified, as he develops little anger for the fortune which may be taken away from him upon his (possible) return. This gentleman-like quality shows that he is an icon of the Imperialist movement, as can be seen in Marlow’s statement “Your success in Europe is assured in any case.” (Conrad, 83) The heartless blindness to the true injustice which has been done is Conrad’s depiction of the “White Man’s Burden,” and the atrocities which it caused.
Questions to ponder upon
1. What does Marlow’s loyalty to Kurtz represent, given the contrasting loathing he holds toward him?
2. What does Kurtz’s concern with his ivory stock parallel in real-world events? Furthermore, does his death represent the end of Imperialism or the bloodshed caused during the Imperialist movement? Why?
Tuesday, September 7, 2010
Ryan S.'s Post on Heart of Darkness
Sunday, September 5, 2010
Heart of Darkness: Frosty's Close Reading
The phrase "first of men" is interesting because of the many Biblical allusions and references made throughout the novel. Does Conrad mean to imply that they are like the "first of men" in that "[their] wickedness was great... and every intent of [their] heart[s] was only evil continually" (Genesis 6) ? If so, then are they destined for destruction as in the Great Flood of the Bible? Or are they like Adam in that the river "resembling an immense snake" (9) led them to the metaphorical forbidden fruit at the center of the garden (ie earth)? Marlow states earlier in the novel that, "I felt as though, instead of going to the centre of a continent, I were about to set off for the centre of the earth." (15)
Also, the phrase "accursed inheritance" is ironic because often an inheritance is associated with something of value; something precious. Furthermore, an "inheritance" does not generally have a "cost" associated with it. What are the men in the company hoping to "inherit" through their "profound anguish" and "excessive toil"? Clearly with such strong language, the cost of what is being sought is higher than the value of it.
Friday, September 3, 2010
Blogging Calendar
Sept 7
Ryan Szaroletta, Ethan Frost
Sept 9
Ryan Wunsch, Emily Crain
Sept 14
Coutnry Allen, Emily Blessing
Sept 16
John Supple, Roberto Corozza, Morgan Heller
Sept 21
Emma Molinare, An Tran
Sept 28
Heather Kotten, Becky Gaffer
Oct 5
Jake Paker, Paul Stevenson
Oct 14
Shane McCauley, Kayla Beckwith
Research Blog Post (Blog Assignment #2)
Oct 19
Shane M., Kayla B.
Oct 21
Ryan S., Ryan W.
Oct 26
Emily B., An T., Roberto C.
Oct 28
Heather K., Becky G., John S.
Nov 16
Jake P., Courtney A., Morgan H
Nov 18
Emma M., Paul S., Emily C.
Wednesday, September 1, 2010
Section Calendar
Tuesday (8/31) no section meetings
Thursday (9/2) Conrad
Week Two
Tuesday (9/7) Conrad
Thursday (9/9) Conrad
Week Three
Tuesday (9/14) Atwood
Thursday (9/16) Atwood
Week Four
Tuesday (9/21) Library orientation session
Thursday (9/23) Hemingway
Week Five
Tuesday (9/28) Hemingway
Thursday (9/30) Historical Society orientation session
Week Six
Tuesday (10/5) Robinson
Thursday (10/7) Robinson
Week Seven
Tuesday (10/12) Midterm exam
Thursday (10/14) Morrison
Week Eight
Tuesday (10/19) Morrison (Paper 1 prompt distributed)
Thursday (10/21) Morrison
Week Nine
Tuesday (10/26) Morrison
Thursday (10/28) Silko
Week Ten
Tuesday (11/2) Silko
Thursday (11/4) Paper 1 draft due in section
Week Eleven
Tuesday (11/9) Silko
Thursday (11/11) Silko Paper 1 final due in section
Week Twelve
Tuesday (11/16) DeLillo (Paper 2 prompt distributed)
Thursday (11/18) DeLillo
Week Thirteen
Tuesday (11/23) no section; thanksgiving
Thursday (11/25) no section; thanksgiving
Week Fourteen
Tuesday (11/30) DeLillo
Thursday (12/2) Paper 2 draft due in section
Week Fifteen
Tuesday (12/7) Gibson
Thursday (12/9) Paper 2 final & Portfolio due in section
Week Sixteen
Tuesday (12/14) Gibson
Thursday (12/16) no class
(Final Exam: 12/22)
Blogging Guidelines
Blog address(es):
Section 305- http://surfacing168.blogspot.com/
Section 306- http://housekeeping168.blogspot.com/
Each student will be authorized to compose new posts (after the first section of class). To create a new post simply click the words “New Post” in the upper right corner of the blog. It would be a good idea to mess around with the blog (without actually creating a new post!) before the day your blog post is actually due. That way, if you have questions you can contact me or a classmate.
II. Timeline
Each student will compose 2 blog posts—one of which you’ll write alone and the other of which you’ll write with 1-2 classmates. We will create the blogging schedule on the first section meeting, and after that it will be the responsibility of each student/group to complete their post on-time, thoroughly, and thoughtfully. There will be blogs before almost each class meeting (none when there are papers due or tests) and all students are expected not only to read every blog post, but to write one comment on a post, each week.
III. What is a blog post in this class?
Blog assignment #1— Close Reading
For this assignment, each student (individually) will identify a passage from the assigned reading, copy that passage over onto the blog, and the compose a 2+ paragraph-long close reading of the passage. This blog post should conclude with 2-3 thoughtful questions that will stimulate conversation in the next discussion section.
Blog assignment #2—Library Research
For this blogging assignment, each student will work with 1-2 classmates to gather research relevant to the assigned reading (from the library, the historical society, or their online resources) and will compose a 4-5 paragraph-long post introducing the research they’ve done and building an analysis of the text in question from that research.
Once the blog post has been written, each group will make a 10 minute oral presentation which should answer the following questions:
what were the challenges & successes of your research?
what kind of research did you choose to pursue? why?
how does this research illuminate the text in question?
(at this point your group should take the class through a close-reading which links your research to the texts’ themes/characters/cultural or historical significance)
IV. Commenting
Each week that you do not compose a blog post (and that someone else does!), you are required to comment on at least one of your classmates’ posts. Each comment should be respectful, thoughtful, and should represent a full thought. For this reason, each comment should be no less than 3 sentences long. Your comments should be made by 7pm on each Friday, although it will benefit everyone if you are able to make comments a full day before a given discussion section.
V. Citation
All blog posts and comments must site their sources. This includes quotations from a given text, outside sources, and images. If the source you’re citing is online then you can simply link your quotation to your source using the “Link” function on Blogger.com. If you are citing the text or another off-line source than please add a parenthetical citation after your quoted or summarized passage using the Chicago guidelines for “First Reference” (see: http://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/DocChiNotes_1stRef.html). If you have questions about this please feel free to ask me! And, when in doubt cite more/more thoroughly!
VI. Grading
I will not grade your individual or group blog posts, but will simply check to see that you’ve completed the post in a timely fashion and that you’ve made a good-faith effort to engage the text and your audience. The same procedures will be applied to your comments, which are required each week that you’re not posting.
Final Notes & Thoughts
It’s striking to me how many different ways people ‘blog’. Or even that “blog” which is a noun, really, is also a verb—a word that means something a little bit different than “writing.” Some people’s blogs are just images (http://thesartorialist.blogspot.com/). Some blogs only have music (http://www.daytrotter.com/). Some people blog really personally/informally (http://thisisindexed.com/) and some blogs are formal/professional (http://www.3quarksdaily.com/). In a way the beauty of blogging is its flexibility, agility, expansiveness.
Now, by including a blog in our coursework it is my intention to open up some of this flexibility to you. I encourage you to add pictures, links, even music to your posts/comments. This is a space for you to be creative in your rumination/reflection about literature.
With that said, I do want you to err on the side of formality and professionalism. Think of your blog entries and mini-essays not as text messages. Write carefully, write correctly, write beautifully. Do not use abbreviations (lol, wtf). Do not post anything that is inappropriate. Do not write anything hateful, prejudiced, or offensive in any way.
Here are some neat/really smart blogs to inspire your posting:
http://www.3quarksdaily.com/
http://www.thesmartset.com/
http://maudnewton.com/blog/
http://www.radiolab.org/blogs/radiolab-blog/
http://www.stevenberlinjohnson.com/
http://www.wired.com/wiredscience/frontal-cortex/
http://blogs.plos.org/badphysics/
Section Syllabus (the online version)
I. Times & Places & email
Lecture: TR 1:20-2:10PM, 2650 Humanities
Discussion Sections:
TR 3:30-4:20PM, 2125 Humanities
TR 4:35-5:25PM, 2631 Humanities
TA Office: Helen C White 7118
Office Hours: TR 12:00-1:00PM & by appt.
TA Email: hooley@wisc.edu
Classlists: (305) english168-305-f10@lists.wisc.edu
(306) english168-306-f10@lists.wisc.edu
What is discussion section?
• Each week students will meet in small groups (19) with a teaching assistant to discuss the week’s readings. It is a time/space that is available to students to raise questions, advance readings of the texts, engage their classmates in conversation and debate.
• In the course of our section meetings we will spend substantial time talking and writing. Often these activities will be intimately linked (for instance on days when students orally present research they’ve done outside of class and which they’ve written about on the class blog). The basic pedagogical principle guiding our day-to-day work in section is that writing about literature is something that helps us work through, consider, and process our ideas—it is not merely an outcome or the final product of literary study. To this end, please think of the writing we do on a daily basis as related not only to the course readings, the conversations we have in section, the formal papers and exams, but to your growth as a critical thinker more broadly.
• Discussion sections are classes that depend on students to be active, enthusiastic, supportive, and courageous. Each student should participate during each section meeting, and should come fully prepared (having read the material and taken notes, with ideas and questions prepared, and willing to build on the ideas of his/her classmates).
How to read for this class
• Please use the course calendar and text list to stay current with the assigned readings.
• Read texts thoroughly and as far in advance of their due date as possible. Then, as we work through the texts together in lecture and discussion you should return to passages as they are brought up and re-read them. By the end of the week(s) devoted to a given text you should feel as though you’ve read each text through at least two times.
• Taking notes is both a crucial and highly individual enterprise. Each student will have a unique way of noting, organizing, and expanding on the notable/interesting/confusing/provocative moments each text will present. I recommend that you gather your notes in one spot (a notebook, a computer file etc.) that you can return to, add to, and of course, cherish forever! You should also take thorough notes during lecture and discussion section. Without an effective system for taking and storing these notes, it is unlikely you will succeed in the course.
• Be curious, be confused. Let your uncertainty/questioning of the text guide you. Get help from your peers, your TA, and Professor Steele. Questions are the building blocks of the best literary analysis.
Assignments
• Essays
There are two essays for this course. For each essay you will complete a rough draft due in section one week prior to the final due date. On the day your rough draft is due you will workshop your essay with classmates. You will use their comments to revise your essay over the next week and will turn your final draft essay into your TA along with your rough draft and copies of the comments you’ve received from classmates.
These essays are designed to build your skills of literary analysis. They are primarily exercises in making and defending an argument/thesis about one or more course texts. To this end, your essays will be graded on how convincing, original, and illuminating your argument is, as well as how well you’ve supported your thesis with material from the text.
• Exams
There will be a midterm and final exam. These assessments will measure the thoroughness of your reading of the course texts, your ability to retain material from Professor Steele’s lectures, and your participation in discussion sections. The midterm will cover the first four course texts. The final will cover the last four.
• Writing Portfolio
Your writing portfolio will consist (simply) of all the writing you’ve done for this course. That includes rough and final drafts of your essays as well as the blog posts (not comments) you submit. This collection of your writing will help establish your growth as a writer and thinker and will be submitted along with your final paper in discussion section.
Blogging
Our “daily writing assignments” will be structured around a blog (one for each discussion section). You will be required to write 2 blog posts throughout the course the term and comment on others’ post weekly. Guidelines for blogging can be found attached to this syllabus.
Oral Presentations
During the second half of the course (roughly) you will present research that you’ll complete with 1-2 peers that bears on and illuminates one of course texts. Details about these presentations will be distributed later.
Grading
Please consult the grade breakdown provide on the main course syllabus as well as the grading standards listed below.
D (inadequate)— Work that is seriously flawed, incomplete, or otherwise marred by technical/conceptual errors. This is work which does not display a coherent argument or analysis.
C (adequate)— Work is acceptable, but there are noticeable conceptual/technical flaws or omissions. An outline of an argument is discernible but imperfectly developed. Other serious flaws hamper the presentation.
BC (above average)— Work is mostly correct, but there are significant omissions or misstatements. Work is marred by minor technical/conceptual errors.
B (good)—This is the base level grade signifying good, but not distinguished work. Work is complete, free of conceptual errors, and may have only very minor technical problems. B work fulfills the bare requirements of an answer or essay but does not advance what has been presented in lecture or discussion section. B work has a discernible argument but is not original, exciting, or surprising.
AB (very good)—Work is very good but not stunning. Writing has no technical or conceptual flaws. There are areas of brilliance, but the argument/answer as a whole is predictable.
A (distinguished)— Work is perfect in all regards. Major and minor points are presented and developed in not only a flawless way, but in a uniquely original or insightful manner. Work demonstrates a lively intelligence and advances the thinking that has been done during class sessions. A work is truly outstanding.
Resources
• McBurney Disability Resource Center
1305 Linden Dr. (Middleton Bldg.)
608-263-2741 (phone), 263-6393 (TTY), FrontDesk@mcb.wisc.edu
http://jumpgate.acadsvcs.wisc.edu/%7Emcburney/
Students with learning and other disabilities (or questions about them) should contact the McBurney Center in order to receive information about available assistance and accommodations. Furthermore, please see me about anyway I can facilitate your learning and/or participation.
• The Writing Center
Webpage: http://www.wisc.edu/writing
Main Location: 6171 Helen C White Hall
Phone: 608-263-1992
The Writing Center offers individual help and tremendously helpful workshops throughout the semester. Please use the Writing Center. The three most effective ways to become a better writer are reading, practice, and one-on-one help from a more experienced writer.